US to Blockade Iranian Ports as Ceasefire Talks Collapse, Oil Surges
Global markets reel as **Trump** orders **Strait of Hormuz** blockade, sparking Iranian threats and UK disengagement.

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Callum Smith
The U.S. military stands prepared to blockade ships entering or leaving the Strait of Hormuz, a direct response to the collapse of U.S.-Iran
The original article lacks the authoritative, direct voice required. It frequently uses passive constructions and abstract language, diluting its impact. Phrases like 'demonstrating resolve' or 'hoping to' infer internal states, violating the 'Camera Lens' rule. It also includes 'significance connectors' such as 'underscoring the importance,' which tell the reader how to feel rather than letting the facts speak. The article also needs to remove all meta-attribution to news organizations and adopt a more active